Cellblock #5 An 18Year Old Meets The Prison Sharks Brutewood Medium Security edition by Stryker Long Curtis Kingsmith Literature Fiction eBooks
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18-year old fish Greg has his first week in the pen. He already knows he wants to be with a man; he dreams of the savory taste of his cellmate, Mason. Then he discovers that Mason feels the same. But Greg is not the only one Mason wants to have a good time with. Will Greg get a real taste for more than one prison shark? Will this 18-year old fish end up in the middle of a shark feast, where he is part of the buffet? Find out in this steamy hot prison story, where Curtis Kingsmith and Stryker Long join forces to give you a sizzling story, full of hardened men, musk and prison lust.
Cellblock #5 An 18Year Old Meets The Prison Sharks Brutewood Medium Security edition by Stryker Long Curtis Kingsmith Literature Fiction eBooks
“Cellblock #5: An 18-Yeah Old Meets the Prison Sharks” is a true short story with a serious issue. Maybe I’m not being fair considering the price and the expectation for “cheap pornographic literature,” Yet, a reader does have the right to expect as captivating a story as possible from the author. While the abilities of each writer is unique, Mr. Kingsmith has a well respected and outstanding reputation in writing not just good, but great literature via his Brutewood Correctional Facilities series, as well as others. As someone with a long term prison role-playing fetish and prison fantasy, I have had the privilege to read many of his works and have not - until now - been displeased.The main issue with this book was my being unable to stay in the moment during the main scene where the three main characters finally meet. I word it this way, as other readers may not notice the problem and thus have an outstanding and exciting experience.
What was this mishap? It is when Mason enters the final scene and then literally enters Greg. As a reader who visualizes as he reads, it is important for the author to describe in a flowing manner the events as they unfold. This one moment, this one paragraph, broke the mood and excitement thus ruining what should have been the beginning of the climactic ending to a wonderfully delightful 99 cent short story. Given the extremely short nature of both the ending and the story every paragraph during this final scene needed clear descriptive text for all readers.
Upon reaching that moment in the story, I found myself immediately stopping, wondering what happened, and then searching for where my visualization went wrong. Where was my mistake, not the author’s, but mine. Only after going back over the previous sentences, paragraphs, and pages, did I realize I didn’t miss anything. Thus from my perspective the story failed to provide, when the writer and I were expecting the reader to be in his climactic moment.
You see up to this point in time Greg had always been wearing an orange jumpsuit and from the story it was still fully on him. While some inmates wear 2 piece uniforms with a belt, this is not the case of a new fish, such as Greg. How then was Mason mounting and entering him from behind? I guess the other main reason I noticed this so quickly was because in a real prison sex has to be both quick and easy to cover up. This is one reason why prison administrators likes jumpsuits. It might be quick to remove, but it isn’t quick to cover up the act. A pair of elastic waist pants is quick to pull down and pull up for a quick cover up.
As previously stated, this mishap may not matter to many readers and it isn’t fair to ding the Mr. Kingsmith and with an overly low score. But, there are many readers who have a prison interest whether it be as a guard, an inmate, an uniform/restraint aficionado, or some combination there of and for them this story rates at best 2 stars.
In the end, I give this short story 3 stars for all readers. Keeping the reader in the moment means even more in a short story and should actually be easier, when it comes to writing, editing, and reviewing.
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Cellblock #5 An 18Year Old Meets The Prison Sharks Brutewood Medium Security edition by Stryker Long Curtis Kingsmith Literature Fiction eBooks Reviews
“Cellblock #5 An 18-Yeah Old Meets the Prison Sharks” is a true short story with a serious issue. Maybe I’m not being fair considering the price and the expectation for “cheap pornographic literature,” Yet, a reader does have the right to expect as captivating a story as possible from the author. While the abilities of each writer is unique, Mr. Kingsmith has a well respected and outstanding reputation in writing not just good, but great literature via his Brutewood Correctional Facilities series, as well as others. As someone with a long term prison role-playing fetish and prison fantasy, I have had the privilege to read many of his works and have not - until now - been displeased.
The main issue with this book was my being unable to stay in the moment during the main scene where the three main characters finally meet. I word it this way, as other readers may not notice the problem and thus have an outstanding and exciting experience.
What was this mishap? It is when Mason enters the final scene and then literally enters Greg. As a reader who visualizes as he reads, it is important for the author to describe in a flowing manner the events as they unfold. This one moment, this one paragraph, broke the mood and excitement thus ruining what should have been the beginning of the climactic ending to a wonderfully delightful 99 cent short story. Given the extremely short nature of both the ending and the story every paragraph during this final scene needed clear descriptive text for all readers.
Upon reaching that moment in the story, I found myself immediately stopping, wondering what happened, and then searching for where my visualization went wrong. Where was my mistake, not the author’s, but mine. Only after going back over the previous sentences, paragraphs, and pages, did I realize I didn’t miss anything. Thus from my perspective the story failed to provide, when the writer and I were expecting the reader to be in his climactic moment.
You see up to this point in time Greg had always been wearing an orange jumpsuit and from the story it was still fully on him. While some inmates wear 2 piece uniforms with a belt, this is not the case of a new fish, such as Greg. How then was Mason mounting and entering him from behind? I guess the other main reason I noticed this so quickly was because in a real prison sex has to be both quick and easy to cover up. This is one reason why prison administrators likes jumpsuits. It might be quick to remove, but it isn’t quick to cover up the act. A pair of elastic waist pants is quick to pull down and pull up for a quick cover up.
As previously stated, this mishap may not matter to many readers and it isn’t fair to ding the Mr. Kingsmith and with an overly low score. But, there are many readers who have a prison interest whether it be as a guard, an inmate, an uniform/restraint aficionado, or some combination there of and for them this story rates at best 2 stars.
In the end, I give this short story 3 stars for all readers. Keeping the reader in the moment means even more in a short story and should actually be easier, when it comes to writing, editing, and reviewing.
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